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Broken and lying on the floor
She’s shut down, can’t take this abuse anymore
She’s running away, inside she’s dying
Running out on us all, outside she’s lying.

A broken doll’s no good to anyone,
Save the other broken dolls
They’ll eat her from the inside, set her up perfect for her fall.

A self-destructive cannibalism,
Leave no evidence behind…
Witness the deterioration of a body and a mind.

She’s crumbling to pieces,
She needs some mending – fetch the glue.
She’s still cracking, but she’s salvageable,
But she’ll need some parts from you.

She’s a broken doll now too, you see,
No one can ever really save her.
Stick by her until she knows your face again,
Don’t let yourself become a stranger.
©2006-2009 ~burnintears
:iconburnintears:

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For Hooleh.

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:iconravencalhoun:
wow this is powerful and emotive. well done
you could make this into a song you know

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Darling, I forgive you after all
Anything is better than to be alone
And in the end I guess I had to fall
Always find my place among the ashes


Evanescence-Lithium
:iconburnintears:
Thank you. ^^

Meh. I wrote it kind of as the basis for a song. But I dunno. /shrugs

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He asks the man for what he can spare with shame in his eyes.. "Get a job, you fuckin' slob," is all he replies.
:iconravencalhoun:
u could try. do u play any musical instruments

--
Darling, I forgive you after all
Anything is better than to be alone
And in the end I guess I had to fall
Always find my place among the ashes


Evanescence-Lithium
:iconmeadow1209:
woah this is really good, fantastic rhythm :D

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Life's not all dark and bleak... you're just looking at your shadow.
Isn't it amazing how many people don't know how lucky they are?
Only perfect people could love perfect people, unless one or other is God.
~CrazyClub
:iconburnintears:
Yeah, but none band worthy. Haha. I barely play guitar or piano.

I play flute, clarinet, saxophone, trumpet, cello, french horn, oboe & bagpipes.

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He asks the man for what he can spare with shame in his eyes.. "Get a job, you fuckin' slob," is all he replies.
:iconburnintears:
Thankoo. ^^

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He asks the man for what he can spare with shame in his eyes.. "Get a job, you fuckin' slob," is all he replies.
:iconmeadow1209:
welcome!

--
Life's not all dark and bleak... you're just looking at your shadow.
Isn't it amazing how many people don't know how lucky they are?
Only perfect people could love perfect people, unless one or other is God.
~CrazyClub
:iconravencalhoun:
wow!
that's quite a list
a play guitar, bass guitar, piano, drums and i sing.

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Darling, I forgive you after all
Anything is better than to be alone
And in the end I guess I had to fall
Always find my place among the ashes


Evanescence-Lithium
:iconburnintears:
I sing as well. I can play one beat on drums. Haha. A couple songs on guitar and bass, and a few on piano.

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He asks the man for what he can spare with shame in his eyes.. "Get a job, you fuckin' slob," is all he replies.

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